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Re: Bedouin Song
Hi there, Kamas. I'll be taking a look at this today. So, I have to say that I rather like this. Your description here is rather superb. You manage to ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Hooves and Heels
As it stands, we have three open centaur spots and four open human spots. Send me those profiles so you can be approved and get your spot! :)
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Easter Bunnies Attack: Part 2
Hi there, magnusbane13. I am Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. This is hilarious. The sheer outlandishness of this whole thing, combined with some pretty funny ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Hooves and Heels
Full Name: Orren Coldwalker Gender: Male Age: 25 Birthplace: The Northern Plains Race: Centaur Eye Color: Blue Height: 7’ 2’’ Weight: 750 lbs Appearance: Orren has short grey hair on ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Hooves and Heels
There are three countries in this world. There is the human country of Bran, with its capital city of Kell. There is the centaur country of Hirmirigan. And, there is ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Is the short story dead?
I've noticed this trend as well. I've even seen it in myself. My works are starting to be longer and longer. Personally, I think it is because I am trying ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: On Breaking Out of the Mold With Fantasy Races
Snoink, who is Toast and what are you trying to teach her? :P
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: On Breaking Out of the Mold With Fantasy Races
FourteenthTarget> When I said "reptilian satyrs", I was envisioning something bipedal. So, instead of a goat's lower half, say the lower half of small theropod dinosaur or something similar. I ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: On Breaking Out of the Mold With Fantasy Races
*Thought this also belonged here, even though it is in my blog* So, I had a little something in my blog about how I think centaurs are the coolest fantasy ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Laugh at the World
Hi there, wonderingkate. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. This is an interesting poem. You've got a very nice framework here, but I think that this ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Bother
Hi there CheekyMonkey97. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I have to admit that I didn't really follow this poem very well. I think the ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: I Love Fruit
Hi there, Critiq. I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this is a decent start, but I think that you still have some work to do with ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Four Letters
Hi there icanbefixed. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I'm afraid that I don't see what your poem is about. It just seems like a ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Underwater Kiss [EDITED]
Hi there, Xirenia! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. For a first poem, this is pretty good. The only thing that I'm not really understanding is how ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Let Me Tell You A Story About Me....
Hi there, maegardens! I'm Conrad, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I have a hard time seeing just what this poem is trying to do. It seems ...
Jan 11, 2010
